Friday, November 12, 2010

The view from your chosen role


ersonal look at a unique point of view of the same thing. Your role in the story of pen, should also experience the story in this way action (storyaction). How do I

do? Very simple. Consideration of these actions and inner thoughts through the brain to show it. The view from your chosen role, through their thoughts, senses and

emotions to express. Whether you use the first person narrative of a few stories any different. "I,m afraid to walk the streets in the absence of ..." "He fears no one

to walk in the streets ..." The result is the same, your goal is to enable the reader to experience the role of mind in view of all things. In the short story, usually

there is only one point of view. Short stories, the replacement of views will result in confusion leaving the story seems fragmented. In the novel, the back there are

many different views, but there will be a major point of view. This is because each story, after all, the story of a role will be based on the main line, as your life

story is just the same as your own. This would be a fatal drawback, if you let your views freely jump from one role to another role, but there is no fixed one of the

main view. Life is not so, the novel will not be the case. For example, if a novel has thousands of words, there will be 5070% of the narrative is described through

the role of the main points. The idea of the role of main ideas, feelings, principles, and attempt to dominate the whole story will be action. When you view to be

replaced, if necessary, it is time for change because it can remind the reader of view, a good understanding of the role of the main points of the face. How do I place

the point of view? The answer is: the point of view in the correct position on, will not miss any major decisive role in the plot. (For example, if you climb Everest

to write a novel, it is hard to view on the western plains never left the little boys) In addition, there are other factors to note. Readers like to see a sense of

suspense stories are concerned. Most readers will view the role of the concerns. The reader is most worried about what? "The most important objective of the role with

ability to achieve his goal."

So you should have a strong opinion on the motivation, drive the story forward a character in the whole story, take action to guide the story to end, will become the

biggest winner or loser roles. This role, the role is often the most struggling, and ultimately change. Therefore, some novel theories said action in the story chose

to change up the role, to cut into the view. Although this is pointed out, however in the novel, if not the design of a good plot, point of view between the role and

the role was changed does not necessarily equate. Because the whole story of the center of the action and the

While observing the people around


8. Do not write softfoot shrimp, the fence: the story by giving a target to create the role of mobility 9. Do not die stuck in trouble: the story should be full of

meaningful conflict.

10. Do not have meaningless events: Please increase your motivation and background according to the novel is logic and rationality.

11. Do not forget the stimulus and response: use of "because, so" to increase the tension of the story 12. Do not forget that this is who the story.

Point of view: as long as the note of the following points, to grasp the point of view is not an issue: Who is this story? Into the role of the heart and has been

maintained although very simple, but there are different point of view angle can use. I,m sure you understand why a character from a, point to tell stories. This is

because we are in real life then we can only by its own, rather than the opinions of others, to understand things. Think of the people believe his story is * so close

to reality and persuasive, he must arrange the event, so that readers like real life as experienced, as a single point through the entire story. Each of us is the

protagonist of his life. Next time you,re in a crowd when you take the time to observe how people look at things around, and those who are interested in you, in your

life, what role to play. While observing the people around, use your imagination, to other staff how to use p

Tuesday, November 2, 2010

But a lot taller


See, it is the pet Murong Kam Wong this little girl, but the clear to hear her name, but not the slightest joy.
... ... ... ... Even to this day, everyone good night, tickets tickets left, drift away ... ... ... ...
You wan princess ①
To the Toffee is yard, far away we heard the laughter, sweet girl, the girl ran from the inside out, who carried a yellow dress like the sun in general, she Fubai race snow. One pair of misty eyes water, her crystal-clear voice call out, "Kam brother, you,re back!"
Jin looked at her Murong Chongni Road, "not seen these days, but a lot taller, and more beautiful."
Her face blush Road, "Jin laughed at his brother and others it!"
She looked at the clear, long eyelashes, a slight wink, "This is the princess wife now!"
The clear look at her as the young and beautiful girl with a kind of childishness is not off into the water like a budding Lingling pink lily.
Her mind kept repeating the complete loss of consciousness in their own words before the Fang Shaoqi, who was his favorite You wan princess.
Yes ah, she is so beautiful and lovable youth.
Murong Kam gently shook the clear, she also had to God, Murong Kam Road, "like what? Yuen You greet you in it!"
Qingqing forced a laugh, "pretty princess!"
You wan clear his mouth smiled, "Ye Hao beautiful sister."
Go together into the Daofang Zhong, Wan Yau Kam Road Murong wrap prettily, "Kam brother, you taught me the year before last set of boxing I,ve been practicing very skilled, when will you teach me a ah!?" She water of bright eyes looking at Murong Kam.
Toffee Road, "a girl of his gun at home more than a bad knife."
Jin is a ridicule Murong laughed, "Oh, not for me after this hard work done, and your future consort, but Nengwennengwu. You,d be good to him for advice for advice, but screw people can do such a thing ears Do not do that, people misunderstood us are shrew Murong royal princess. "
You wan face suddenly suffused Murong faint blush Road, "Jin brother, you,re bad, they laugh at people!" Then we have to tighten up his ears.
Murong Jin is escape plane containing dye her, "I,m the Diaomangongzhu, like you would dare marry you!"
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Toffee Road, "you do not make fun of Jin Er Wan You, a big girl she was ashamed that her in-laws!"
You hurled against Murong toffee Wan Road, "the mother Princess, you have to take the possession of Kam brother."
She just safety seat, toffee, "you need anything for the wedding it?"

But prepare for the all the time him


After all, he is also worried about it because it came to pick her up, and her feelings for Fang Shaoqi was her wishful thinking, which in turn blame Who got it?
Today, almost all the wine she woke up.
She whispered, "Thank you to pick me!"
The atmosphere of the carriage a little embarrassed, Murong Jin looked at her, "I went to the room to see you not, her maid said you came out a man, I do not trust you!" Although the emperor wanted to use him, but prepare for the all the time him.
He does not care how can it?
The clear light of a laugh, "I am so adult, and be fine."
Murong Jin emperor he naturally can not be negative relative louboutin sale to their say, so the semi-serious ways, "No one came out after drinking!"
Qingqing asked Murong Kam Road, "people can come out with a drink, right?"
Some angry Murong Kam Road, "No, No, No!"
Then in speaking of the sort, "I,m going to go to the front, and do not let me worry about you."
The clear heart suddenly sour a little, is I have been wronged Fang Shaoqi rejected, or inadvertently shown Murong Kam worried she moved, her heart is very upset at the moment, she has eyes This is how to tell a situation.
To the palace, the servant out of Rama cars, Murong Jin jumped off the wagon first, and then escorted the clear down, he whispered in the ear came exhort, "pregnant you are more careful."
The clear grip in the palm of his hands, warmth came.
Butler busy road to see them come back, "princes, Goddess, You wan princess came, it was toffee room!"
Murong Kam mouth with a trace of a smile on the clear channel Chongni, "You wan come, we will soon see."

She fell was not afraid of your favorite Fang Shaoqi Murong Kam know


Sounds a little soft, "You mind what were you thinking? Surface to resist a thousand miles, because a willow But why does Princess and drinking to forget!"
He looked at her handsome features, laughing, when Jide, she told him that she failed to understand in his bridal chamber in a while now, he thought, maybe this is God is arrangement.
Would have thought he is careless of her, but why every time I see her unhappy, their feelings of loss will be up suddenly.
The clear leisurely opened his eyes, looking at the front of Murong Kam, then relying on near her, and her face is attached to her chest, her head hurts, but still fighting back seat christian louboutin discount is a body channel, "how do you come?"
Murong Kam Road, "the palace to see you,re not out looking for you."
Then he rebuke, "You drank too much on the outside of a woman more dangerous!"
Oh, the clear low voice a cry, though she got the answer, but not happy that her heart, she looked at Murong Kam Road, "Fang Gongzi did not tell you what, right?"
Murong Kam slightly Tiaomei, way, "ah, he told me." See, when she was drunk he would feel bad, but waking up to see her he felt angry that she ran a man to drink with Fang Shaoqi .
Cooling off a bit worried, she fell was not afraid of your favorite Fang Shaoqi Murong Kam know, just something that was rejected or not be good to know!
She sort of Qieqie asked, "you know?"
Murong Kam Road, "thought you were really so generous with the surface, but do not want to steal you ran out of drink alone, but I am a man, queens, which can not belong to a single woman."
Have to say, the moment he began to unconsciously want to stimulate her and how he would like to see tension on her face shown.
May be cooling off but it is indifferent to say the phrase, "ah, in this normal for a man three wives four concubines." As if her eyes has nothing to do with this man completely the same.
Sadly ②
Murong Kam has been indifferent to her words of this sentence enough to choke choke, this woman really is not worthy of sympathy.
Jin is face looked Murong by the Fair, face Bengzhuo stared out the window.

He looked at her a little scarlet cheek


You hurled against Murong toffee Wan Road, "the mother Princess, you have to take the possession of Kam brother."
She just safety seat, toffee, "you need anything for the wedding it?"
House and happy about to get married if she is not Fang Shaoqi is wife, the clear is very nice but a bit tricky like the little princess, just the thought of her upcoming marriage in Fang Shaoqi, the clear mind to think that the existence of a sour plugging in the chest.
You wan Murong slightly at the delicate pink of her lips, "I pray to the Temple million, back when it called for me to hear Huangxiong a consort prince, really do not discuss louboutin sale with others soon."
Although with the Murong Murong Ms Xu is with the mother out of Yau, but died when the Queen is still small so young You wan to being handed over to the parent Murong Jin Qin Princess Royal at the time temporarily to raise, so wan with their You The relationship is relatively affectionate.
  
Murong Jin with a smile, "party is about to marry my brother sister small Wong, Soon we will become a family!"
Said went over to sleep in the clear beat Hengbao up.
Leave downstairs.
Fang Shaoqi at the window looking to the clear hold on the back of the carriage Murong Kam, silently in the heart of Road, "the clear, I am sorry, I can not love you! Me also saddled with too many things."
While the sound of the wind window frames, then sadly floating on his heart, he wanted for his family and his father considered.
Also to the clear can lead a stable life, but it is not by his own disposition to.
Gradually see their horse run away, and turns into a small point, Fang Shaoqi closed the window, his head and downed the bottle of sake.
Sadly ①
Carriage, holding still sleeping Kam Murong the clear, and her eyelashes seem to tears with a crystal, he gently climbed up to kiss, and that tears are salty.
He looked at her a little scarlet cheek.

"like what


... ... ... ... Even to this day, everyone good night, tickets tickets left, drift away ... ... ... ...
You wan princess ①
To the Toffee is yard, far away we heard the laughter, sweet girl, the girl ran from the inside out, who carried a yellow dress like the sun in general, she Fubai race snow. One pair of misty eyes water, her crystal-clear voice call out, "Kam brother, you,re back!"
Jin looked at her Murong Chongni Road, "not seen these days, but a lot taller, and more beautiful."
Her face blush Road, "Jin laughed at his brother and others it!"
She looked at the clear, long eyelashes, a slight wink, "This is the princess wife now!"
The clear look at her as the young and beautiful girl with a kind of childishness is not off into the water like a budding Lingling pink lily.
Her mind kept repeating the complete loss of consciousness in their own words before the Fang Shaoqi, who was his favorite You wan princess.
Yes ah, she is so beautiful and lovable youth.
Murong Kam gently shook the clear, she also had to God, Murong Kam Road, "like what? Yuen You greet you in it!"
Qingqing forced a laugh, "pretty princess!"
You wan clear his mouth smiled, "Ye Hao beautiful sister."
Go together into the Daofang Zhong, Wan Yau Kam Road Murong wrap prettily, "Kam brother, you taught me the year before louboutin shoes last set of boxing I,ve been practicing very skilled, when will you teach me a ah!?" She water of bright eyes looking at Murong Kam.
Toffee Road, "a girl of his gun at home more than a bad knife."
Jin is a ridicule Murong laughed, "Oh, not for me after this hard work done, and your future consort, but Nengwennengwu. You,d be good to him for advice for advice, but screw people can do such a thing ears Do not do that, people misunderstood us are shrew Murong royal princess. "
You wan face suddenly suffused Murong faint blush Road, "Jin brother, you,re bad, they laugh at people!" Then we have to tighten up his ears.
Murong Jin is escape plane containing dye her, "I,m the Diaomangongzhu, like you would dare marry you!"
You wan princess ②
Toffee Road, "you do not make fun of Jin Er Wan You, a big girl she was ashamed that her in-laws!"